Satyam Tiwari

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Lekhny composition -14-Jan-2024

Makar sakranti


The song of sun God for the sun God.
Praise for the crop , praise for the sun's warmth.
Winter chill sword swing but crop survive all odds.
Frozen man ,star hope light, make him survive night.

Sun has come to meet his son.
In his house , lowered his ego and increasing love.
Saturn leaves his stubbornness, lowers gaze.
Meeting after a year , meeting for short time.
The meeting of understanding, meeting of relationship built and greet.

Sun has moved , Saturn has join.
Equal sharing between brothers , between day and night.
The cold , the dry pain , the frozen tears all say goodbye.
The stuck time moves , progressing towards growth months.

Makar Sankranti, the ode to sun.
Mixing of Saturn and sun , elements of stubborn and ego.
Mixing of both emotions , give different shape of love, paints new relationship of father and son.
Meeting with the father after long years.

Symbol of meeting of father and sun , donkey  ears passed.
Removing , all bad emotions, all bad moment outside.
Both became stranger , meeting after a gap , removing ego , bad taste in relationship.
Meeting of father & son start of hopeful relationship in a new way.
From cold harsh to beautiful warmth place.

Take this time to meet your father.
Greet him love , tell stories of past and present.
With a cup of tea , healing relationship start towards better time.
Shelve away the frozen ice , breadth a new start in life.

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Mohammed urooj khan

23-Jan-2024 01:46 PM

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Punam verma

17-Jan-2024 08:48 AM

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Reena yadav

15-Jan-2024 11:04 AM

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